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Dreams by ~Seraph5:iconSeraph5:

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Out of the corners of eyes, dodges little black creations from sight.
Under sleeping lids lie cleaver fantasies and polychromatic cities.
With a wandering mind follows fleeting visions of faces and feelings.
Beating in young hearts are the hopes of sunshine filled futures.
Simple thoughts of creative string woven into the silver lining of clouds.   
And a breath held for the second waited, answer lingering on fates tongue.
Every one a dream.
©2008-2009 ~Seraph5
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Submitted: February 6, 2008
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I wanted it to be original so instead of doing something generic i decided to think of the different ways and forms dreams can occur in. I hope ya'll like it.
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~aspirer:iconaspirer: Feb 6, 2008, 5:23:42 AM
ooohhh, polychromatic! that word gave me shivers, c!! i loved this!! and the line about young hearts and sunshine filled futures...wow. just...wow.

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When I say I am a Christian, I'm not shouting 'I've been saved'. I'm whispering 'I get lost, that's why I chose this way'. When I say I am a Christian I don't speak with human pride, I'm confessing that I stumble, needing God to be my guide.
~Seraph5:iconSeraph5: Feb 6, 2008, 6:31:19 AM
awww thanks i actually was just trying to do one that was different from yours i'm going 'damn aspirers thinking of all these awesome ways to deliver themes...must...think....of....way....to.....do....theme oh i know heavy HEAVY poetry lol

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~aspirer:iconaspirer: Feb 6, 2008, 2:25:47 PM
well its perfecto!

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When I say I am a Christian, I'm not shouting 'I've been saved'. I'm whispering 'I get lost, that's why I chose this way'. When I say I am a Christian I don't speak with human pride, I'm confessing that I stumble, needing God to be my guide.
~Seraph5:iconSeraph5: Feb 6, 2008, 2:39:03 PM
thank you!!! :glomp:

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One of the largest supliers of KuroxFai fanart on DA =P

If the world is ending I'm throwing the party.

I want to have Patrick Stump's bunnys
*megsmad:iconmegsmad: Feb 6, 2008, 7:22:12 PM
i faved

fuck its good cazabee

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~Seraph5:iconSeraph5: Feb 7, 2008, 10:51:10 PM
thanks meggi ^_^

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One of the largest supliers of KuroxFai fanart on DA =P

If the world is ending I'm throwing the party.

I want to have Patrick Stump's bunnys
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